Okay, so, daily poems happen to need to rest, so I'm publishing some rough stuff here. I went back to 'Diagnosis' and, as a friend suggested, I 'hardened' it by paring it down, way down. I like it more now. It's closer to expressing what I'm trying to express. Funny how fewer words do better work in most cases. It's just a matter of being able to find which words can do the heavy lifting best.
ciao
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